In "Problems & Solutions of the Logo", you referenced the meanings that you and your team were going for in terms of what the logo was meant to symbolise... but then you haven't actually gone on to tell your readers what those meanings are. Please go through this section and make sure you've added that sort of detail, remembering to stay linked to key technical elements and research from earlier in the year.
Andrew -
ReplyDeleteIn "Problems & Solutions of the Logo", you referenced the meanings that you and your team were going for in terms of what the logo was meant to symbolise... but then you haven't actually gone on to tell your readers what those meanings are. Please go through this section and make sure you've added that sort of detail, remembering to stay linked to key technical elements and research from earlier in the year.
- T. Marcus